I like both your takes on Panty and Stocking, I'd say I liked stocking's thicker ink lines. For thinner lines, like on Panty, I think if you colored the ink lines differently in places (dark yellow for the hair, and dark red for skin like knee caps and armpits.) it would've turned out better. Other than that, I like the folds on her dress, and the only thing I'd try again is a different smile on her. Keep up the good work.